Opening Scene Script

Title- The Pen on the Pavement 

Scene 1    

  • -        Sorceress runs through the woods, constantly looking back while running
  • -        You can hear her footprints and breathing
  • -        She stops and takes out a magic object and clicks a button
  • -        It opens a portal, not seen on camera, but heard. (A whooshing noise)
  • -        Sorceress looks back then steps through the portal
  • -        You can hear it close. (Same whooshing noise)

Scene 2

  • -        Tilt down to a pen on the sidewalk
  • -        Fade to Black

Scene 3

  • -        Shot of a girl sitting while putting shoes on
  • -        You can only see her lower half
  • -        Cut to her walking out the front door, locking it, and walking down the driveway.
  • -        While she’s walking, she puts the hood of her hoodie up.

Scene 4

  • -        Cut to a long shot of a girl walking up to a crosswalk.
  • -        She puts her earbuds in, and music begins to play (becomes trans-diegetic sound)
  • -        She crosses the street walking towards the camera.

Scene 5

  • -        Cut to establishing shot of the crowded city street.
  • -        Cut to her walking down the street
  • -        She continues to walk around and observe people walking.
  • -        She looks down at her watch and looks back up
  • -        She sees a woman watching her across the street
  • -        Cut to the woman’s view of her.
  • -        Cut back to the girl looking back at the woman and losing her in the crowd
  • -        She continues to walk
  • -        She looks down to check her phone then continues to walk
  • -        She sees another person in front of her somewhere looking at her, but she ignores it.
  • -        Cuts to shot of her feet while she is walking
  • -        She hits a pen with her foot and looks down
  • -        She sees it and looks around to see if anyone saw her, then picked it up
  • -      She pockets the pen and continues walking

Scene 6

  • -        She bumped into a tall man with a scowling expression
  • -     Her earbuds are knocked out and the music stops
  • -        Angry Man: HEY! Watch where you’re walking!
  • -        Girl (quietly ): Sorry
  • -        She keeps walking
  • -        Shot of her hoodie pocket with her hand in it and the pen sticking out
  • -        Fade to black




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